I Need help with a zombie story. Anyone want to help? (Anyone who has read World War Z will be a great help!)?
The story will follow the same premise as Max Brooks’ World War Z. Now keep in mind, this is a story that I’m writing for my own entertainment, I have no intent to publish this thing. Anyways, it’ll be based on World War z, except from a first person perspective, rather than the “interview” style Brooks used in the story. I’m hoping to use major events in the book such as the deployment of the Alpha Teams, the Battle of Yonkers, and so on. I’ve had this concept of a soldier (my character) who is 23, and has been in the Army for 3 years. He has combat experience, as was shown in his two tours in Afghanistan. (I am not going into detail in the story; it is just to show he can handle himself, that he’s not just some new grunt). And that’s about all I have for him at the moment.
I’ve had this concept of a soldier (my character) who is 23, and has been in the Army for 3 years. He has combat experience, as was shown in his two tours in Afghanistan. (I am not going into detail in the story; it is just to show he can handle himself, that he’s not just some new grunt).
Now, the virus originates in China, and spreads world-wide within a matter of 3-4 months. When the virus reaches the United States, the US government organizes a number of US Special Forces to stop small, isolated outbreaks in small American cities and towns by any means necessary. These are known as the Alpha Teams.
This is where I have my first problem: I want my character to periodically be checking the news about the virus and being suspicions of it, whether he’s on base or at home and notice it’s spreading through Asia and all that. While at the same time I need him to be doing things an active duty soldier would do (so that way, entire paragraphs aren’t just his findings on the news and what he thinks. It’s him and what he did that day on base, etc)
Like "today I did this, I saw an outbreak in Costa Rica, (Go on with what the news reporter said) “I’m worried, but I’m going to Dave’s house." and stuff like that. I’ve considered developing my character during these parts, but I’m not really sure how. Any help with any of these problems would be awesome. Thanks guys and Gals.
I’m not quite understanding the problem. Is it that you aren’t sure how to have him get news reports while he’s out being a combatant? It seems like a smartphone in his pocket would solve that.
Is the problem figuring out what exactly he’s doing? Character’s need a central conflict. On one level this guy is fighting a virus. He may also be fighting for factual information. Is what’s on the news really what’s happening? Or is there a CDC coverup for some reason? He may have other conflicts. Perhaps he does not get along with his C.O. Maybe he’s pretty sure one of his fellow troopers is betraying the group. Maybe one of his friends is killed as a result of the betrayal, and then he also has to figure out who is the mole. All of this turmoil helps to define his character. If he can figure out the coverup or find the spy, then he’s smart. If he takes care of his friends, then he’s loyal. If he’s insubordinate with his C.O., then we know he may be a loner rather than a team player, and perhaps he should be a leader instead of a follower.
Ray Bradbury advised that writers create wonderful people as characters and then do terrible, terrible things to them. Put them in really difficult situations and see what they do. I think that will help with your hero.
I totally know what you mean about writing for your own enjoyment. I hope this helps at least a little. Have fun.

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